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Spirit_

Spirit_


Posts : 76
Join date : 2012-07-13
Age : 26
Location : San Rafael, CA

Character sheet
Name:: Spirit
Gender: Female
Rank:: Yearling

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PostSubject: Spirit's Life-Short Story ~Intro~   Spirit's Life-Short Story ~Intro~ EmptyThu Jul 19, 2012 12:27 am

Okay so I'm going to write a story about Spirit. I'm going to divide the story into parts. The isn't a part; it's the intro so you know who was in the pack.

My name is Spirit. I was born in a small pack a year and a half ago in the spring...

Spirit is the most dominant pup in the litter. She is pure white and had faint yellow eyes.

Arrow was the biggest. He was a red/brown wolf with sky blue eyes.

May and Zelda were twin sisters. They were white with grey patches all over them.

Fang was the runt of the litter. He was jet black and had grey eyes.

Blizzard was the Alpha Female of the pack. She was also a red/brown wolf. Her eyes were a mixture of brown and yellow. Her mate was Dusk.

Dusk was the Alpha Male. He was pure white with a black muzzle and red eyes. His mate was Blizzard.

Flare was the Beta Female. She was a red wolf with emerald green eyes. She didn't have a mate.

Angel was the Healer of the pack. She was pure brown with purple eyes. Her mate was Shadow.

Shadow was the Hunter/Warrior of the pack. He was a pure grey wolf with amber eyes. Angel was his mate.

Please tell me how I'm doing with this! If you have any comments or advice please post them~


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Join date : 2012-06-28
Location : somewhere

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Gender: Female
Rank:: Hunter

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PostSubject: Re: Spirit's Life-Short Story ~Intro~   Spirit's Life-Short Story ~Intro~ EmptyThu Jul 19, 2012 12:53 am

I personally think this post is good; I'm not the best writer though Neutral
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Spirit_

Spirit_


Posts : 76
Join date : 2012-07-13
Age : 26
Location : San Rafael, CA

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Name:: Spirit
Gender: Female
Rank:: Yearling

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PostSubject: Re: Spirit's Life-Short Story ~Intro~   Spirit's Life-Short Story ~Intro~ EmptyThu Jul 19, 2012 12:54 am

Thanks! It's ok if your not the best writer; you can be a good reader Wink
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Location : With my pack.

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Gender: Female
Rank:: Beta Female

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PostSubject: Re: Spirit's Life-Short Story ~Intro~   Spirit's Life-Short Story ~Intro~ EmptySat Jul 21, 2012 1:58 pm

Looks nice! I was going to do something like this as well!
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Spirit_


Posts : 76
Join date : 2012-07-13
Age : 26
Location : San Rafael, CA

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Name:: Spirit
Gender: Female
Rank:: Yearling

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PostSubject: Re: Spirit's Life-Short Story ~Intro~   Spirit's Life-Short Story ~Intro~ EmptySat Jul 21, 2012 2:03 pm

Thanks Finso. I'm glad someone likes it. I've read your bio... when are you going to write about your past?
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PostSubject: Re: Spirit's Life-Short Story ~Intro~   Spirit's Life-Short Story ~Intro~ EmptySat Jul 21, 2012 2:04 pm

Im doing that now.......
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Join date : 2012-07-13
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Location : San Rafael, CA

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Name:: Spirit
Gender: Female
Rank:: Yearling

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PostSubject: Re: Spirit's Life-Short Story ~Intro~   Spirit's Life-Short Story ~Intro~ EmptySat Jul 21, 2012 2:35 pm

ok Smile
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